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Aug 23, 2006 | 8:02 PM EDT

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Look Through the eyes of a girl and her painting as things become a little fightning for her... Please leave Constructive comments I LOVE to hear from you! This flash is kinda a sequal to "Through Eyes of The Moon" Im not sure how this will go over with you guys but please watch it before you vote.. anyways Thanks for watching!! p.s. I didnt mean to delete this... so here it is again sorry about that!!! sorry

Reviews


pro-foundpro-found

Rated 5 / 5 stars

kickass!

i love the whole thing but what i like most is when she was in the cage and the lips showed up and sang the song!!! sweetness! keep them coming!



snomaninacavesnomaninacave

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I like it

I loved the concept. On an artistic level I think you've got everything just about nailed down, and all you need to work on in the future is fleshing out more details as you learn how to do them more effectively. I'm sure you're well aware of that as an artist, and I look forward to continually more complex pieces of work.

As a technical note, I do have one bit of advice. In various scenes where the protagonist is falling, you can create many different moods simply by changing her rate of fall in relation to the screen and the objects around her. By making her fall more severe, you can create a crashing tone, but by having it slow like it is in this flash, it gives off more of a drifting downward sort of feel.

Please keep making more = )



SkinnerBoxSkinnerBox

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I dig.

I like your style. I notice how much effort you put into color. I love when the girl drops into the hand, the band of red that falls out. The music goes with the visuals perfectly. The only advice I'd have for you is to work on mouth movements and transitions between scenes. Try breaking things down by syllables, I guess. Great job in general, though.


cheshirecat1582 responds:

Yeah I have a little trouble with sync... But thanks for the great review... I really do put alot of thought into colors... as you have prob. seen in my last flashes... but anyways thanks again!! Every review is important... I need all the advice i can get!


LostsideLostside

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Taking a page from Karl Marx?

Or is 'Opiate' the name of the song... I don't know much about Tool.

Either way, it's cool! I kind of got the feeling it was a sort of 'creation trapping the creator' sort of thing. I often feel that way when I'm working on something important to me (art or otherwise). I become trapped in it. I wonder, was this an intended message or am I reading something into this that isn't already there?


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cakrajescakrajes

Rated 5 / 5 stars

IT'S AMAZING!

You've gotten so good! i'm so proud of you. you can really tell that you're improving every day. each one just gets better and better! i like them all and i hope you keep doing it! and i like the read headed girl in this one..reminds me of the red headed girl i know...and she has about the same hair lenght too... (i'm talking about you, if you didn't catch on...) <3 jessie c


cheshirecat1582 responds:

Jessie!!! Lol Thanks!! Yeah The Girl kinda resembles me... lol I didn't mean to make her look like me but I love red hair... lol anyways Thanks for reviewing!!! Im trying to improve!!!