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here is my second entry to newgrounds
*please note* i know the audio is kinda crappy
i got a crappy microphone from best buy for like 5 bucks
i know the voices suck
I liked it.
Nicely random, especially the "moral" at the end. I liked the graphics and animation, too. I especially liked the incongruous juxtaposition of the pelvic thrust dancing with Mr. Simon's "Elevator Music." A few more seconds of your characters dancing to that music would have been cool, lengthening the movie without straining the gag and making it feel too long. As far as the sound is concerned, I suspect your microphone isn't the problem, but how you're using it. Back away from the mic so the audio doesn't clip. If necessary, bump up the recording level in your audio recording software. And please: "If you're thrusting your pelvis..." not "If your thrusting your pelvic..."
Lol, weird really weird but it was funny
Strange and bizarre. I agree with earlier reviews that suggested buying a better microphone. The voice acting wasn't that bad, so I dunno why you said it was. Like the last guy said, the static is the killer. Anyway, the drawings were above average. In terms of humor/style it was random, but not ROFL random, and was a bit too short (messing up the comedic timing). 5/10 overall. Being a little less thrifty (with the mic) would have gotten you a 6.
Gotta love mrSimon's music!
Several ways to improve:
-Refrain from saying anything about your movie sucks in your little comment space
-Add a replay button
-Either get a better microphone or use text (the voice acting isn't bad at all, but the static's a killer. Invest more than 5 bucks into it and you're set. Or just steal one from school!)
-Don't use the same title music for music within the movie (get ANOTHER mrSimon bit for the theme song
Other improvements can be made, but i like the overall style. Too many people try to pull random off and fail miserably, but your movie works okay. Good luck with your flash career, and give me protect points!
This would have been a awesome movie if it were longer. The music with the guys dancing made it even funnier. You should really add some more things in this to make it longer. From the beggining of it, I was thinking wow this is awesome...But before It was starting to get good, it was over. 3/5, Really looking foward to another movie by you that is at least 2 minutes long :)
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