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I really made this as a break from making an upcoming flash series (starting September first).
The opening part is from an alpha I made for the series.
(PS: Sorry for the file size...I strive for quality)
(PSS: I compressed the sound by request)
((( FUNNY )))
Haha ok this was funny, i like the "TWO" characters good detail and lots of effort shown, as for the sprite ones ha that was the funny part i though, its not a bad fladh at all, hope to see more of your work sometime...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe longer and more episodes...
Funny flash with some good character designs...
The people were drawn pretty goof and it did have voice acting. Pluss the sprite animation was pretty decent. I also liked the concept of them watching the sprites on tv. Good luck with your series.
The tv had a white background which I still have to point out since white screens are my worst enemy. Also it was quite short and you know it.
Well, what you showed us, it looks promising, but there are some glaring issues that are EASY fixes, but dragged your score from me down.
1) Their faces. Please makes their lines darker. As-is I can't make their noses out at all, or mouths or any other line that may be there. I can see there is a nose, but it's so feint it can easily be missed. They look like blank, white faces.
2) Compress the sound. This should not be so large. It's WAAAY too big. COmpressing sound is a few clicks of a button and it's done. Please do it not only when you replace thi smovie with the fixed version, but also in your full-length feature.
I stress again this looks good. I want to see it finished, bu tyou've got to fix these things first.
Thank you very much
I took your advice on the compression, but I don't think the lines are a problem, at least when the characters are larger (which they mostly are, just not in this particular animation)
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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