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Aug 21, 2006 | 9:59 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place August 23, 2006

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Thanks to Tom Fulp for letting me submit this & Frontpage! I appreciate it.

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First and foremost, this is a re-edited version of my last flash movie (This is NOT stolen!). This contains about 40 seconds of new animation, edited scenes, tweaked drawings, etc. Consider this canon, and the last one experimental (if you've seen it). I'm about 95% complete the next episode, so that should be out very soon. If you have any questions, I'll do my best to answer them. I would greatly appreciate it if I get lots of feedback!

Note: All done in flash 5 (I really need to get Flash 8!!)

-If you're not confident about your computer, then set the quality to medium or low-

Reviews


LoveBlueSkyLoveBlueSky

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 11, 2006

Wow~

For a flash animation, the art was really good! but I think the animation could use some work. If you just added a little more frames for those action scenes, i think this would be one of the greatest flashes I've ever seen!

oh.. and your running cycle could use some work.. when that girl was runnign, it looked really funny... ^_^;;;



WexfordWexford

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 23, 2006

Original, but I didin't like it.

The graphics were really good, as everyone has said, they were just a bit choppy. I know it's hard to do frame-by-frame, but still. The font was really hard to read at times too. I suggest making your animations a bit larger so you can tell what was going on. Firefights were great though.

Style was original. A bit animeish for my taste, but don't change it.

Sound was alright. The music choice was great, but the quality voice audio was horrible. Either it was too stratchy, or a quiet voice would be followed by a loud one.

Overall, this looks like a promising series. As I said, I'm not a fan of the story, but I'll watch more anyways to give it a chance. Good job and keep up the good work, while improving.



JonathonKujataJonathonKujata

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 28, 2006

Nice

Good flash, the volume on some of the voice actors isn't that good though... might want to keep that in mind for number 2. Other wise it was awesome. Keep it up.



mako151mako151

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 2, 2009

good animation, audio needs tweaking

Whatever mic your using, you either need to stand back a bit, or get a pop-guard. That'll stop the breathy feedback we keep hearing... Otherwise, good stuff, keep it up.


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Danger101Danger101

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 21, 2006

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Im pretty sure ive seen this in the portal before but it was very good