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Aug 21, 2006 | 9:59 PM EDT
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Thanks to Tom Fulp for letting me submit this & Frontpage! I appreciate it.

http://www.geocities.com
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First and foremost, this is a re-edited version of my last flash movie (This is NOT stolen!). This contains about 40 seconds of new animation, edited scenes, tweaked drawings, etc. Consider this canon, and the last one experimental (if you've seen it). I'm about 95% complete the next episode, so that should be out very soon. If you have any questions, I'll do my best to answer them. I would greatly appreciate it if I get lots of feedback!

Note: All done in flash 5 (I really need to get Flash 8!!)

-If you're not confident about your computer, then set the quality to medium or low-

Reviews


HaravikkHaravikk

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Really good

Really good flash, I don't have a lot of time for the review so I'll just mention what to fix:
- voice acting, the actors are fine, but the sound quality is a bit pants, either the microphone or compression are keeping them from sounding as good as they could in this
- pace/switching. The movie was a bit confusing as it kept switching too much, and one man without a name has dark hair, while another has light hair, are they the same person? It really should have been more clear in this rather than relying on a web-site or whatever.

Keep up the great work though, aside from those two points it was awesome!


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WolfenheimWolfenheim

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Amazing!

Very well done, well timed, well drawn, good music, good writing

just.
tell your voice actors to get better mics.



w1shw1sh

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great, but needs sound work.

That was long. I didn't expect that. Impressed me a lot that it didn't end after that first short scene. :)

Anyway on with the review!!

Sound - The voice acting is good, however, the quality of the voices is bad in the sense that it makes everyone sound like they have a lisp. Try getting some better sound software and take more time on it making it perfect (especially if you plan on making this a series).

Animation - The characters were very original, unique, and... well.. cool. But! I think you tried to be lazy and not add very many action sequences. That or you aren't good at drawing action poses. Probably the latter judging by how the girl ran. If you are gonna focus on her running for so long, at least add a few more frames to the animation.

Animation Tip - If you can't draw action poses well, have a friend take pictures of you in different poses, then trace a few in-betweens, you'll get the hang of it pretty quick that way.

Music - Best music arranging I've heard in a Flash... ever. Better than a lot of shows on TV too. Very very well done. The extra loading time was definitely worth it.

Overall - Fucking loved it. Very posh. :o



tom5coattom5coat

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Awesomeness

But damn, it was hard to hear the voices! That is pretty much the only thing that needs improving, then I would give a perfect 10



ice-cold-fire2ice-cold-fire2

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good submission...FINALLY

Ok this is gonna be a good story i predict...AS LONG AS! you do this episode again, make it longer in length, make the screen alot bigger and like everyone has said, voice quality, STILL this is good, but please please please, i want you to do it again, PLEASE!