That was some funny stuff
The Good:
It was funny. The cast of characters was well developed. I thought that your characters were very cute. Almost too cute.
The Bad:
The flow of the overall movie was choppy. At some points the audio was softer than at other points, so work on that. Clean up your preloader.
Overall:
Not too bad for a 2nd flash. So to encourage you I'm going to give you an overall score of 10, although because of some minor problems it really should have gotten closer to a 7.