Far underrated.

Your graphics were very nice and stylish, especially for your age. Your only problem with your animation is its just too short. I can't wait to see more from you, because I know its only going to improve from here.

Good start!

Hey, it's better that I could do. Then again, I don't have flash. Keep up the good work, make it longer, and you're on your way!

haha cool

good start i think you should make more like it id watch

ok....

It was kind of pointless, but keep on workin' at it and you'll get somewhere with it. Nice try for your first one.

Alright, hear me out first.

I gave you a zero because this really isn't the type of thing that should stay on Newgrounds, it felt more like a demo, like you were showing your animating skills. Your on the right tracks as far as the animation goes, and truthfully, I would like to see more work from you, preferably a movie with a plot and characters and so on. I think you could really go far if you try and put more effort into it. Now this was an honest review, a little critisim if you will, please don't just say "Well atleast i made a movie, wheres yours?!" it pisses me off when people do that. Hopefully, this review helped you out a little, and remember to keep trying!