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Robin Root 2

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Aug 15, 2006 | 10:51 AM EDT

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MrCrawfordMrCrawford

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Sub par

A few notes I'd like to make clear

1. Your animation is okay, but it could be fixed up. Its mid range and it shows, same with the art.

2. Seriously not funny. Didn't even crack a mental smile. I suggest that maybe you get someone to write a script instead and animate around that (just like how a comic book has an author, artists, et cetera)

3. You have to promote your cartoons better. Only roughly 300 people have even seen this. Hype up your movies and improve their quality by a longshot.

Overall, your animation has potential, but I see a lot of room for improvement. Work hard and focus on improving your skills in Flash, not your scripts. That can be written by any multitude of people.

But most importantly, don't give up!