Score: 6
"Slightly above average"
date: September 21, 2006
-The Good-
Well even though the movie was fairly short i must say that the whole plot of the flash wasn't too bad. I mean you built up tension until he entered the cave, i thought a big monster thing was going to come out the cave but instead, a guy in a wheelchair came out. Also the graphics, even though they were a bit bad, i found that they were closer to good than they were to bad, if you can se what im saying. Also i see that you lot like to add extra's to your movies, which is good, every detail helps.
-The Bad-
To start things off i'd say the audio when the guy in the wheelchair spoke was very very distorted, i'd like to know if anyone that actually ever watched this movie understood what he has saying. Also, if you're going to make a short movie then make it very interesting, and cram loads of detail into it before it has to end.
-Overall-
Yeah it wasn't too bad actually, i was hoping for something a little bit better from four people all contributing to the movie. Oh well. In not saying the movie was bad at all, but you guys need to work on your flash a bit. Just saying.
Author's Response:
Nice review.
The characters were made by a newbie, I can only blaim him:).
The voice, well the voice was dont by 'Russ', a guy I found on the flash forum, he kind of didn't do the voice I was looking for, so I adapted the flash for him.
but all the points you made were valid, thanks.