Score: 6
"Great Effort."
date: December 7, 2008
Yeah you are right that you are not supposed to have "-kun or -san" with a name is you are refering to yourself. You only use it when speaking about other people. In my opinion, even using "watakushi" in the introduction was too polite. It felt a little strange to me.
Other then that, if the art was improved, and perhaps if you added how to read and write it, would be a great place to build a foundation to start from.
You could make flashes based on topics and focus on those. Like one could be introductions, or everyday phrases, instead of placing random words and grammer strcuture together.
I would like to see more.