LOL
so he went threw all that trouble just to go take dump lol. he should have you the emrald for toilet paper lol. great job this is going in favs =). 10/10
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That´s my second Flash. I used the MI music for this. I hope you´ll like it.
Thank you for watching ! Please help to put this in the Mario collection ! Thank you !
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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First the agent-letters... then an evil criminal... a shiny rock to steal... And at the "Happy End" there`s so much to laugh!!!
Spy Guy
lol he just needed to take a dump=)
The-Soulhunter responds:
Thank you very much ! Muchas Gracias ! Vielen Dank ! Merci !
What would Little John say right now?
I think he'd say... "WWWWWWWWWWWWWHAT!!!!!!!!??"
All joking aside, man, that was WAY TOO ANTICLIMACTIC!! What were you thinking! He jumps through the lasers... to go to the washroom! XD! Way too short, and you can do much much better. Keep trying.
Oh, come on!
That was way too short. The music you use preps up the audience for something exciting and interesting and then you cut it off right after. There's not much of a plot. This would make more sense if you're planning on concluding it with further chapters. Otherwise this seemingly unfinished storyline in this flash could not stand alone and may/should get deleted. So, either you should have kept going in making this one or you should make more concluding sequels.
Also, try giving your flashes a menu to help raise your interactivity score.