Score: 8

"HEHE"

by: Liquid-86

date: September 2, 2006

Now since you used one of my audio clips in this flash I love it ^_^

Score: 10

"Good work."

by: ZENON

date: August 26, 2006

Since I assume that there is going to be a third, I'm looking foreward to at least having one more submission on my audio page ;)

I'm not a flash god (as you can tell from my flash animations) but, you need to make it run a little more smooth, you know? If theres sound effects in the backround, like walking, for example, put that effect into a sound editor like Audacity and make it quieter.

As for the speech bubble thing... if you ever need a voice actor so that people don't have to read, I'll help you out :)

Keep it up! I look foreward to the next one.

Oh, and thank you for using my music :D

-zenon

Score: 10

"great apart frm you overdid the blood"

by: madmatty06

date: August 9, 2006

that was better than the 1st but the blood was a bit too errr bloodish same as the last guy about facial expressions. but it had a better storyline(omfg storyline) in this one and it continued frm the last one without completely losing its originality overall i hope u make more.

God blessed the day i saw whitlob 1 on portal page

Score: 7

"An improvement on Ep.1 in almost every way."

by: Orchidaceae

date: August 6, 2006

A little voice in me, who really loves style, was wondering if it was actually better to have voice acting, instead of text-bubbles. I think that if the lines of each bubble were shorter, it wouldn't be any bother to read them -but do get voice actors if possible.

Also, you might want to give the blobs a little more expression. Eyes shrinking, face turning white as they realise their expiration date has just passed. BANG! Bye bye blob. But that's coming from another -and sadistic- little voice in my head.
The stylistic little voice in my head agrees, by the way, but also thinks that the blood was a little bit too much of the good thing.
Anyway, both little voices liked it, so keep on going!

Score: 7

"it had its moments"

by: slimt2100

date: August 5, 2006

it was pretty funny for the most part. the only complaint was the repetitive graphics. but you obviously took the time to make a long script, so i gave it a 4. suggestion; maybe have different versions for the mouths so it doesn't look like they're happy when they're talkin shit or about to die