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Aug 5, 2006 | 12:16 PM EDT
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What would happen if the ugly duckling never grew into a swan? A sad tale that would be.

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Reviews


Blue-HoodyBlue-Hoody

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 7, 2006

As JL as you can get.

Now before I start reviewing I want to adress all the people who I've read leaving reviews saying how horrible this is and that it made them sick. The point is showing the reality of the situation at hand, you feel bad for the "ugly duckling" you're made to understand his plight. The reason behind what he did was clear, his anger at his father made him into a cyclone of rage laying waste to all targets in his path.

He saves the child. But then what?

How is he supposed to care for a child? What is he going to do?Bring it back to the mother claiming that he had just found it and there was no husband attached? Maybe he could just mumble "Sorry for killing your husband." and run off, hell chances are the mother could be just as bad. Bring it to an orphanage? I think not, this is a stunted man, emotionally stunted by the hand life has delt him. He couldn't raise it, nor could he let it be subjected to anymore of, what he considers to be "this horrible life." So he does what he sees is right in his eyes, he ends the child's life.

And that's what makes him the ugly duck, not being able to see past his own issues and not being able to grasp the full scope of what is happening.

The whole character in this piece makes it shine alone for rasing moral and ethical issues while watching it. It's another gem in JL's pocket.

As normal the almost story book graphics are great, colorful and discriptive. Everything, as odd as it appears is the same style which is quite a hard task to pull off. You also managed to keep everything in a real world setting which is another added bonus. Nothing was gritty, to dark or harsh, it is as life looks everyday. Normal. I also have always liked the way you manage to keep your animation nice and simple yet have it as deep as it can get. Instead of having to sift through squiggly lines and over dramatic styles I'm given a nice plain toon. Artsy and yet not as quite.

It's just another short on top of the already huge stack of amazing shorts done by Jeremy. I hope to see another one soon.


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MarwoMarwo

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 8, 2006

Lovely!

This was an amazing pice of art! simple storyline, but the way it was all visualised and explayned made it very entertaining.
It gave me a horrid feeling witch is great, not many flash movies do that! It was short tho, but that only means that i have to watch it again! :)

Fantastic 5/5



Da-marDa-mar

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 25, 2007

Whoa

That's freaky. I love your flashes.



DARkrisDARkris

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 13, 2006

Great

always loved your work



JudasBoothJudasBooth

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 5, 2006

This is onr of the best videos I've EVER seen!

Everything about this Flash screams OSCAR!! The Animation and music flow together like a river drowning out the pain and reality of life. I love this video and think that it should be at #1 right now. I wish there were more like this one!
Please let the Artists know how you feel about it, Good or Bad, its pushing the boundries of what we know as Flash!