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That´s my first Flash.
My Problem is : I´m from Germany and I´m lerning English since 3 years, so I´m not very good...
And I can´t write a long text.
But now : Enjoy it !
iagree with UltimateAxl
yeah u really need to work on yoshis movement, other than that the futures looking up!
I like It
I`m from Germany too so i understand why you don`t wrote a long text but back to the Flash for the first Flah thats was good thought nice work. Und unter uns ich kann ja nicht mal ne simple bewegung Konstruiren ^^ Also weiter so
Pretty good start
Nice flash for a beginner needs a little bit of improvement maybe fix Yoshi's walking which needs to be done before your next movie. Watch out I'm going to see next part when it comes out :)
Pretty incredible for someone that just start in Flash. For my appreciation, it was OK. The thing you could improve is that you must put more frame by seconds to the Flash to be fluid. I know it's long but it's gonna be better.
Continue to improve, you gonna be very good!
Score : 6/10
Vote : 5/5
Not a bad start for being a first whack at Flash, though you could use some time to develop your skills, they can only get better. Keep at it, take your time, and I hope to see the next part soon.
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