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I am a whore.
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Dang! I thought I was yor biggest fan, oh well.
This is my third favorite song out of all of them on Newgrounds...
1.) The Ultimate Showdown
2.) Fiberglass Monkey/ When Robots Attack
3.) Pumpkin Pie
P.S. I like pie!
this is the best work u ever did
this the greatest work u ever did =) im your 1 of the biggest fan =)
Thankyou very much.
Naturally you get a high score for the Lemon Demon song. The graphics weren't half bad either. May I just suggest a menu of some sort? Like for subtitles on/off. And for the website in the corner, mabye just make an ending to advertise the sites next time. Very good flash otherwise.
Lemon Demon's song, all the style, the singing, and the topic, are reminiscent of TMBG (in a good way, not in a plagraistic). It's entertaining, fun, and fruity. It manages to be delightful without trying too hard.
On the other hand, the animation and graphics leave a lot to be desired. The graphics weren't interesting or catchy or appealing; they were flat. The animation did not for the song either to compliment or complete it. It was boring and uncreative.
Try making the graphics more three-dimensional, and give us more to look at. They got repetitive, so add variation. Work on expression especially, as I saw a lot of potential for that in the flash. Most importantly have fun with it and don't force it. Your work should feel comfortable and natural.
Keep at it.
I'M SO Jealous!!!
I started working on a video for this two months ago...but alas you beat me to it. Awesome cartoon and great song choice
A story about finding your true calling.
Help me to help you
A young artist trapped in a boring job uses his imagination to escape from reality.
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