Score: 6
"Wasn't grat but it was okay."
date: August 7, 2006
Not a lot to say about this flash really.
The flash was animated fairly smoothly. The drawing of guy behind the desk pretty good, as was his mouth. It's a pity you tried to use pictures all the time. Also, add a background! There's a desk and two people in the middle of nowhere.
The voce of the guy behind the desk was fine, the annoying thing was the muslim was a bit quiet and hard to hear at times.
I tink you tried to make this funny, but somewhow it just didn't work. The idea was, but you just messed up slightly.
Author's Response:
Yeah I agree, I think on paper this was a really funny idea, but it lost something in the transfer to flash. I don't know what it was. I'll look into it. Maybe call Carmen.
If I knew where in the world she was...
I'm glad you enjoyed the animation kind-of, and I'll try to improve the voices for the muslim lady. Thanks for your review: thoughtful and interesting, thanks.