Score: 7
"A fun little entry."
date: August 2, 2006
That was almost over too quickly. Great use of sprites, and of utilizing everything you filled the screen with, but maybe next time you could build the tension by and excitement to more critical mass by having the characters be more confrontational with each other, more arguing and threats of violence between them all that escalates as each additional person enters with their own reason for wanting the money. Then you could also have hints of possible alliances forming -- hey, sometimes if what you want is some money, you're willing to help someone else get some too if it scores what you need. Also, were there no guards for the money van? Taking out the guards and the driver/s while fighting amongst themselves over the money would have ramped up the tension (not to mention the action) between the characters before it all blew up in their faces. Now, despite the lengthy suggestionns, keep in mind I thought this was some friggin' good stuff, I just think you showed a lot of potential for something great, and I'd like you to share that with us. Extra points for using an awesome Queen song that also nicely underscored the flash. Keep up this kind of work, and let me know when the next one is up.