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This was originally submitted about half a year ago. I have revamped it, fixed the sound synch, and redid the background. All in the name of professionalism. I plan to have it in my design portfolio. Advanced critique appreciated.
Based on a comic strip by my good friend Ben Palcynski. See his stuff here: http://www.hiylea.com His latest animation: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/300263
Thanks for taking the time to view it! I appreciate it!
the drawings were pretty good in this one and the audio was cool though.... but it was far too short. i still think that this one was cool... but i thought that it could've done better if it was a bit longer. nice work on it though.
Well, I like the graphics and style in this movie. The muisc wasn't bad, either, and I thought that it set the mood kind of well. However, this flash was pretty short. Maybe you should just make it longer...
Yep, that's what everyone is suggesting. ^^
The graphics were well done. You drew the background out pretty nicely and I also like the character designs. Taking the words from the previous reviewer "I liked the potato man!". I thought the voice overs were pretty well done, and this was pretty humorous and entertaining. I wasn't expecting that ending.
Well, this is kind of short. Try making a longer movie I think you would do a good job.
Thanks for the wonderful critique! My next short will definitely be longer. Thanks again for your comments!
Graphics: ..... well, i guess the pidgeon was well drawn
Style: Been done before
Sound: The pidgen echo was LOW QUALITY, however, the sound was ok.
Violence: This is one sick sence of humor
Interactivity: The potato man was pretty funnyxD
Humor: ... yet again sick sense of humor
Overall: Lengthen your piece!
Thanks for the critique! Everyone seems to want more violence and a longer toon. Will try to improve on these areas in my next short.
it was ok could have been longer and may i suggest more than one bird sound
I agree, I hate that coo. Thanks for your comments!
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