not bad

well, it was a nice animation, but i was a little bit distraught by how short this one was. however, if this animation is the beginning or an intro to a series... it has a lot of potential to be a pretty interesting series. if you continue on, i look forward to seeing more.

Seemingly short

I am at a loss as to what the plot was to the story except that it depicts the construction of a hub. The style of animation you are creating is something that looks out of that artpad game on the internet, but keep in mind that if you were playing that, you would be one top-notch artist. The potential I see with your art is in line with the salad hand series, which is a good thing. Perhaps you should go down the more surreal, horror-type stories. The music of choice could use some work as it detracted from what was going on. It made it look like building a hub was something to be considered cool. The placement of buttons to be used was surprisingly well done. If you really work on it I am confident you can produce a very creative flash/game.

Your first submission is a great start with plently of potential.

...INTERESTING...

I thought that this was a pretty interesting flash, actually! I liked how you had those little dots everywhere, anmd I absloutely loved the music. The quality of it was pretty good, too. I thought that it was too confusing, though, at the end, with the diferne tbuttons ont he computer screens. Also, maybe the graphics could have been a teeny bit better (that's not a huge complaint, though).

2/5
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fantastic

i loved how it wasn't a regular fbf, but you had those arrows flying about everywhere, but if you're so good at that animation, you should have refined it to make it perfect, it could hae been the best thing i'veseen for a while if you put in a little more work, but thats just being over critical, it was an amazing little animation.

WTF

What the heck was that I didn't even understand it