Could be better.

It was very short and the graphics weren't that great, but the plot itself was kinda funny. I hope the next one is better.

Better. Much better.

I saw the earlier version, and this was a lot better. I do still think you could have added some more story line to it, but I liked the backgrounds and the little bit of story that you added to it. This is passable as a short, but it'd be even better if you'd go further with it. Maybe make it into a seagull killing spree, where the seagull kills everyone on the ship and then takes the wheel himself? Or something?

Oh, and the voice was still hard to hear and understand.

Good work on improving this, though.

Heh

Pretty good ... kinda dum, but I'll say this: The graphics were AWESOME for a 1st entry, and it had that delayed humor efect. Keep tryin, man

Don't resubmit crap

If it was blammed the first time, it'll be blammed the second time. The improvements are only minor and the overall flash is still bad.

well

i'm pretty sure you already submited this today