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it was good
I thought it was good till the last part with that girl. Plus you could have made it longer. other than that it was good.
wtf that was amazing
Movie's elements rate well overall remains undone
I liked your intros but you gave me no plot or story to enjoy. The last scene I was waiting for little miss bouncy to blow piros head off. You disappointed me greatly by cutting off your movie to short. I only gave you 2/5 because you sapply cut off a great movie. If you want to make a good continuing series be sure to finish it on a good note. It would have been better if you had finished with pyros intro rather than moving into the plot.
I laughed out loud at some parts, but really, it seemed like one big long intro. Introductions need to be short, sweet, and to the point, and yours was...the whole movie.
Well, make something out of it and it'll be great.
On an unrelated note, the drooling Pyro was hilarious.
Soo... What happened?
This is all just some damn intro to something bigger. and if this is the intro its WAY to long. Do snap zooms on all the characters right away and name them early instead of making this an uncomfortable piece of suck.
Also, this better be going somewhere cool.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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