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Jul 24, 2006 | 5:55 PM EDT

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Author Comments

The new guy's a mummy!

Comments and suggestions are welcome, I love reviews.

*personal note*
This was just an idea I had in my head and I decided to make the recording, then I animated some of it and I really liked it. This was really fun to make and good practice for facial expressions and hand drawings. Making funny stuff rocks. Thanks to denvish for making the open source navigation bar.

Reviews


BezmanBezman

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 24, 2006

shorter and sweeter

----- Starts automatically. You should always at least have a play button at the start. It can be a minor inconvenience and there's no reason for it.

++ Kinda amusing

--- A lot of it seems to drag. We know where the plot's going, we know what's gonna happen... you just drag it out by repeating what's already happened or having them repeat lines.

+++ I do really love the animation of him pointing, then having his arms twist round.

++ Decent voices.

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It was fairly interesting, with an amusing concept, but the script and movie could've been cut for a shorter and sweeter animation.


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Coaly responds:

I actually did cut some. Your comments are noted, thanks for the detailed review.


dreamstohackdreamstohack

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 24, 2006

Decent Submission

Your animation was decent, and the sound was quite good. You obviously have to work on imporivng the graphics and flow, possibly lengthing it a bit. I daubt this go aorudn will survive, but with improvement it coudl wrk.


Coaly responds:

Thanks for the review, or whatever.