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Uploaded
Jul 24, 2006 | 1:53 AM EDT

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This is my first flash animation. If there are any problems with it that you know how to fix, drop me a line.

Yes. It is disturbing.

I hope you enjoy it.

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FrenzyFrenzy

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

...PRETTY BAD, SORRY...

+COMMENTS+:

The style of this movie was... weird, but I guess kind of unique. The part about 'Kids, Murderous Insanity, etc.' was kind of funny, too.

+IMPROVING+:

Well, it really didn't make any sense at all. Also, you should have made it logner, and the filesize is too big for a movie like this.

1/5



JimkemonJimkemon

Rated 3 / 5 stars

You've got something there

Nice drawings and animation but you really need you're own ideas. Everybody has seen David Firth's Black and White series and Newgrounds doesn't need another animator with no ideas of there own. Try making up a storyline and you will do well.


Gra-ham responds:

Thank you, thank you. Storylines are coming, I just needed practice. I didn't want to ruin a storyline that was good (unlike this one).


SheepdoggySheepdoggy

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

on the way...

were you trying to make anything like David Firth?? The sphere is right, but it's too vague, yeah I know that Firth's movies are vague as well, but they show some logic because they are longer. I think you are pretty much on the way, but the words and other remarks, could have stayedon screen a little longer, cause I had trouble reading them. Nice try anyway it looks good, make a longer one with a better storyline and I'll love it!



Joshy-SemanaJoshy-Semana

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It was ok...

...very much like David Firth's a black & white cartoon about berries and roof tiling, although it didn't come upto the same standard. It was an alright effort though. It might help if you planned the cartoon a little more, it didn't really seem to do much.

Josh.



danielatheinsanedanielatheinsane

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad...

The style is reminiscent of David Firth. I would have to say it’s a good first effort.