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Sorry about the sound, I could not get it too work on flash 8. Ep II will be out as soon as possable!!!
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bad boy need more work on flaaaaaaash...
this little puppy of a flash needs work
the scenes seemed laggish (they were moving too slow) and some text during the "blackouts" were cut off. the music ended too early during Bowser's mass army being revealed (by the way, u probably didn't have to do those close ups on the army members since u could tell how many there are when the camera was high above them and u could see them all). fix these things up and u will have a great flash. despite these problems, ur idea seems good.
flash needs more
im srry, but this was a bit out of the water. i really thnk you should add more content and shorten some of the sceenes. basically nothing but an introduction happened and it took 2 minutes to do the entire thing. i just think you should make it a bit more aluring with more action.
I know how hard making flash is, and the whole Mario in war has been done a thousand time (even I made a mario war one lol check meh profile)
anyways yeah, I guess it was cool, but man oh man. As soon as I started watching it was like a total rip off of Mario Brothers. Also the sound hurt. And uh, the selection of sprites was wierd, you should really stick to one style. Oh and the words were like butchered and chopped in places.
Anyways, somehow, you MUST find a way to fix the sound.
Make it more original, this was almost the same as Mario Brothers.
Stick to a sprite style, it was wierd having Mario and Luigi sprites in SMB style world.
So yeah, I hope some of my words gave you some constructive criticism...I look forward to seeing part 2.
Wow, this is almost an exact copy of the other Super Mario Bros. flash. Please don't make crappy copies of good flashes.
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