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This is my very first real flash project. There are still some flaws and some stuff I have to work on. But just anna know what you guys think of it
The graphics and style weren't bad in this flash, I guess... also, the sound was pretty good, too.
Well, I agree with the last reviewer that it ended way too abruptly. Also, this flash has an absolutely enormous filesize for such a short movie. You can improve.
I was just getting into it then it stopped, it ended way too abruptly. If its the filesize you're accomodating for, either lower the graphics or optimize your audio.
Make it a little longer next time. Otherwise, pretty good.
For your first real project.
A good start
I think this could be a good movie but it definately needs to be extended. I think if you used that as the beginning and then showed the US flanking and taking that one outpost and then coming in behind like they always do on karkand it would be good.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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