Geometric Genius!

This is an amazing first submission! You did well with putting the movie to the music, and you were able to make the shapes move in as logical a way as shapes could walk :)

The guitar part was interesting, but if you want a personal opinion, if you had a star or something with two appendages aiming out of it, you could feasibly have that hold and seemingly play the guitar. A triangle works in all honesty, just as a music student, I would think a star would be more apt to play guitar.

But this is fine as is! Keep up the good work!

Not bad at all.

That's a good first portal submission. The animation was good, but I must say the walking looked so awkward, like they were walking with 1 leg.

I like the way you animated the guitar solo. Pure talent! I think your animating style will take you far, padawan. (Says the guy who hasen't submitted anything yet...)

I like it!

That was a good animation, I quite liked it.

Constructive critisism time...
The only thing I didn't really like were some of the textures/backgrounds
i.e the street texture, the brick wall wasn't too aligned and the restaurant you could see repeating at times.

But hey it's still good. I think the best part was the guitar fill, nice drawing!

:D

that was kool, lol

nice.

A very nice touch. Simple visuals and a innovative and unique way of animating shapes.

Next time I'd like to see you use people instead.