Neat style
I like the graphics in this aswella s the interactivity but the buttons seemed abit small, Make some better buttons say like something with good color, flashy, and animated, something that makes the whole screen have a good look, I noticed you had buttons, well Instead of using butons to proceed to the next text bubble or scene, Why not just ave it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button. Anyways nice flash.
Needs abit fixing but was neat.
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