((( DECENT STORY )))
~~REVIEW~~
Ha well this was decent, it had a good story aswell, but also presented some really good characters allthough the could be more detailed i still like what you did with them, very nice work indeed, make more when you can...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and depth witin the characters...
~~OVERALL~~
Good flash with some really neat characters but also a decent story notbad work here...
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