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[Old] Whitob Ep.1


Date Submitted

06/29/2006 | 12:37PM EST

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[Old] Whitob Ep.1
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Author Comments

This is my first submission. During the production of this animation, I truly learned that flash can be quite hard to do. Enjoy.

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Average Score: 6.8 / 10

Score: 6
Skutieos109

"Good"

date: July 24, 2006

Glad that you decided to make a flash. Its pretty good, but the animation needs some improving, so practice. The story is good, and its pretty funny.

Author's Response:

The animation? You mean how the blobs move or something? Anyway, thanks for the review. (Episode 2 is on it's way)

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Score: 6
Orchidaceae

"A good idea, resulting in a nice flash."

date: July 13, 2006

This movie had a nice idea behind it. That was also the main reason why I liked it. Graphics were okay -could use more moving parts, like making the blobs...err...blob when they bounce-, as was the sound. The violence and humor were okay too. But the style is good. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks alot. Yeah, I agree that the blobs need more movement. I'll see into it once I start working on Episode 2. Thanks for the review.

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Score: 8
Khoostar

"Hilarious!"

date: June 29, 2006

Hey, I agree with the last review, I thought it was really funny, really clever. Alot of flashes try too hard to be funny but this one actually was, I liked the ideas you had too. Nice work!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Well, since you guys are liking this one, there might be another one...who knows...Better check the portal soon! Anyway, I'm really glad you liked it and stay tuned for a second one! And again thanks for the review and good score. Cheers.

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Score: 10
madmatty06

"that was great"

date: June 29, 2006

that was pretty good if it doesnt get blammed ill put it on my favorite submission list

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the great score and review. (By the way, it didn't get blammed.) :)

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Score: 4
orthodoxyl

"the signs were boring..."

date: June 29, 2006

i could have died reading the signs haha, but nonetheless, its pretty ok, and the ending is not bad, i like flash wif ending wif a slight twist or smth along the line

Author's Response:

Well, if the signs were boring, you shouldn't have read them at all! Anyway, thanks for the review.

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