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Eulogy For 'Death of a Sun'

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Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

06-29-06 – 07-26-17

Author Comments

First of all I would like to thank all the people who offered their constructive and positive comments for The Sun's Lonely Tears. It was a great help. This is the sequel to that one. I hope you enjoy it. Keep the constructive critism going as it is a great help.

Reviews


BarbarosBarbaros

Rated 1 / 5 stars

that music

its from oblivion


G-LockedG-Locked

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Odd

Unique, but still WTF.


paintfacepaintface

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

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Drop the outlines, especially the one around the sun. A black outline around the sun just looked horrid. It wasn't as big a deal on the horizon of the planet or the moon, but that outline killed the sun, not the cloud.


SpiffSpiff

Rated 1 / 5 stars

ok

i still dont want it here and i'll give some criticism. stop sucking. other than that, none


leodasvacasleodasvacas

Rated 2 / 5 stars

less tween

Try to make less tweened animations, frame by frame looks way better. Also try inserting some sound effects.


elimelim

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Nice, it's something different. Nature needs grfx

Cute idea. Here are some thoughts:

Graphics: It's all nature stuff and nature videos love good graphics. That's what they survive on (think Dances with Wolves and stuff like that). So perhaps spend more time on the graphics: detail the grass, shadows and highlights moving across the land as the sun moves around.. I think it can still be a simple stage (ie: no animals or extra clouds etc needed) keeping the focus on the main characters, but just a lot more attention on the graphics of those main elements.

Sound: nice music. I think it was a good choice. It looked like you were trying to give the sun some emotion by making it turn into a red Giant and so on. Maybe sound effects could add to the emotion in that scene... like the sound of a raging fire?

Story: Were the cloud and moon friends? Why'd they kill the sun? The motive needs to be clearer otherwise it might just look like another version of a random violence stick figure fight. - thanks


KonandaKonanda

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not bad but not great

The plot was missing for the most part and was just pretty random. Also the moon is not luminous it only shines because of reflected light from the sun. So if the sun died then the moon should stop glowing.


ArkwentreArkwentre

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

needs a little work

i liked the idea a lot but you need something else.......maybe voices or even just commentary or something......and maybe some sound effects for the fighting......i like your style though. by the way that last guy, Konanda, this is a flash animation. it doesnt need to be perfectly logical.


TonioMiguelTonioMiguel

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

The sun seemed human-like

I think the piece I liked the most was how human the sun appeared. It no longer feels like the radiant inanimate object that burns ones skin in the summer but a playful child. I got a little confused about the cloud and the interaction between the moon and the sun.

The earth should have lit up when the Sun came to confront the moon.


crispy1200crispy1200

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

dumb

this movie was one of the stupidest thing i have ever watched


XytonionXytonion

Rated 3 / 5 stars

hihi

bit funny


raydog160raydog160

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

OK

I liked the music and the animation was smooth, but i just dident get the point of it.


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars

(( Nice effects ))

~~REVIEW~~
this was notbad kinda neat with the effects and all but also was abit short, trya na dadd abit more next time, it was interesting though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more.

~~OVERALL~~
Nice effects on this short animation.

~X~


M-YM-Y

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's good

I thought that it was pretty good.

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