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A dream of a man...
I like the idea, of this and it had some nice effects and overall a nice style, it was entertaining and i had fun watching it, good style on this, you could lower the file somewhat, but other then that it was decent.
Needs some compression.
Couldve been better
Ok flash. Few pointers though:
1. Call a flash "the dream" and it could be anything. That means you dont really need a story, dreams are abstract and random.
2. Make it a bit longer, the title was kinda making me think there would be more to this flash.
3. More detail in animation.
It was O.K for a first time...
First of all, to those wondering: the song is called, "delusions" by snayk (check on the left).
Back to the review: it was kind of weird, and didn't make that much sense. A guy looks at some water, a duck comes out of nowhere, he opens his eyes, he looked a little better with the eyes closed by the way. The flash is called the dream, you could've done anything...but you decided to do this, which isn't really that bad, just needed to be longer, more thought out, smoother anamation (the hand moving). Anyways, nice first flash, you've got potensial to be a great flash artist, and I hope to see more from you.
michael khaitov you are a little bit
selfish, dont you?
I mean why you didnt write "I did it all" in the credits? Why you write your name FOUR times? Sorry, but that lowered my score..and who made the music? You forgot to mention, therefore I guess it wasnt yours..if I am wrong than RESPECT! Because it was a beautiful piece of music! Overall I think the dream was too short and could have more explanation..I really liked the drawing of the duck and the guy above it..you should go on with this kinda stuff, cause it is really dreamy and mystical.
Did you make the music?
I watched it twice to check the credits but didn't see any reference to who made the music. You did everything else so it seems like you must have done the music as well.
If you did, you should include it in the credits because it was really worked very well in the video. If you didn't, you should mentioned that too (because it's a little dishonest not to).
The way the duck appeared at the end threw it off from the serious feel enough, and in a relevant enough way (water theme) to make it a giggle spot, but it didn't seem like that was intended at a joke so I'm not sure which way to go with that.
Was there more to the dream? It seems like this could get a much higher score if it had either more story (dream-like story is still ok, but not totally random) or if it was a bigger punch line at the end so it could be judged on the merrits of being a quick "oh you got me" sort of flick. - good job, I'd like to see a second version.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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