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My first flash on newgrounds. I've made better but they are all too big. I hope you enjoy.
Not bad but needs improvement.
Well notbad this ws interesting it was decent for your first, but could use some fixing up, some of the text, and some extra stuff is needed maybe abit od effects something that shows abit more effort, anyways nice job, but think about the suggestions on this.
Needs work, but its a nice start.
Hey, Just to let you know: Before you finish the flash, before you complete the project, make sure you check your spelling :)
I enjoyed the storyline, but the animation was bad. If this doesnt make it i'll try and animate it for you. AIM me at Nzxer. Hope it makes it!
-N Z X ER
Hahahaha, thanks for the offer but no. I've just started out with flash and this is just the beggining. The good stuff is yet to come. Have you seen the sequel Death of a Sun?
I liked the story, very original. However, you did not give credit to the music from Elder Scrolls, Oblivion.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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