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The Sun's Lonely Tears

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Uploaded
Jun 28, 2006 | 8:32 AM EDT

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My first flash on newgrounds. I've made better but they are all too big. I hope you enjoy.

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M-YM-Y

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's ok

Not bad but needs improvement.



XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Entertaining flash.

Well notbad this ws interesting it was decent for your first, but could use some fixing up, some of the text, and some extra stuff is needed maybe abit od effects something that shows abit more effort, anyways nice job, but think about the suggestions on this.

Needs work, but its a nice start.

~X~



RegenTFanGRegenTFanG

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Constructive criticism

Hey, Just to let you know: Before you finish the flash, before you complete the project, make sure you check your spelling :)



NzxerNzxer

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good.

I enjoyed the storyline, but the animation was bad. If this doesnt make it i'll try and animate it for you. AIM me at Nzxer. Hope it makes it!

-N Z X ER


Kataji responds:

Hahahaha, thanks for the offer but no. I've just started out with flash and this is just the beggining. The good stuff is yet to come. Have you seen the sequel Death of a Sun?


bbcmicrobbcmicro

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice

I liked the story, very original. However, you did not give credit to the music from Elder Scrolls, Oblivion.