mmmm.... well

ok im gonna be constructive (or try to be)
firstly, the humor was good, but text humor tends to suck unless its really slick and funny. yours was good observational humor for ff games (cept for 8 as your team followed you evrywhere in towns and shit) so my advice for that is BUY A MICROPHONE, they cost like £5 and u dont even need to instal it (well i didnt)
also
the graphic's: whilst im sure the graphic's are probably good for you, they kinda suck, im aware drawing talent is kinda well, not your fault but whatever, they were good for the kind of spoofyness you were going for but u need to tighten it up a bit, sime shading here, some there. also DONT DRAW BAHUMAT UNLESS YOU HAVE A GUN POINTED AT YOUR HEAD, EVEN THEN HESITATE, im sure it was good for you on flash, BUT IT SUCKED ASS, thats my one non helpfull saying
yeah, thats about it really
well done if this survives blammnation
if not good luck with your future films

It was ok

It wasn't too great....
That summon didn't look like Baramuht (how ever you spell it)
The guys could have been drawn a little better.

:)

ok random but the mage also appears in ff9 and 10

Uh.

I want the last five minutes of my life back.
Preferably the time spent writing this as well.

It's a funny situation, really - the plot's so vague you had to have played the game before. And yet, anyone who's played the game would never find this funny, cause they would never be so oblivious.
You insult our intelligence with this very flash video.

yeah...

what that was lacking was anyreal point what so ever in future it's better to just not overplay a point and work on truly making it random, not unfunny random funny random