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My first flash ever, go easy >_<

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Too short

Abit short, and could use some color to it, Black and white flashes are notbad, butl while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation. It was very short, so in that type of flash why not either add more content or you could make a flash with a number of short flashes like this one or even adding it as a part of some collab would be good aswell, anyways nice work.

Abit short.

~X~

kinda good

i liked mutual better than your other 2 flashes but o well i give u got my 5

YO u got a great style

I enjoyed this very much so much that chesse flew it was very cool the one little thing that pissed m off is the saucey paint look of the blood and the fire. Peace Hit me up if your in the audio portal peace syntrus out (0_0)

not bad!

I'm actually quite fond of the style on this one. It was a little short but for a first flash it wasn't that bad. There was no sound on that one sound you should try to put some in. 3/5.

I was the savior. ;)

Nicely done. From the begining, you would expect some crappy noob's creation, but this is very good for a first flash. I think the drawings saved the movie, because it was very detailed, and it had nice animation too. Try to add sound, color, and make it longer. You would have a daily award for sure!

In the mean while, we have this. It's a short, cute thing to watch, and it's quite underrated.

eyeknowstuff responds:

thanks for the save :D

I knew it was gonna be low because of everything mentioned in every review O_o

I'll need to figure out how to add sound since I just started yesterday. Color is just a matter of time, I wanted to see if I can get it to submit in the first place and I was just experimenting with some FBF.

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3.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 23, 2006
2:51 PM EDT