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This is mostly a learning experience for me with voices and animating lips. i hope you like it, its a short little joke. nothing major. Thanks for watching!
(( Funny animation lol ))
notbad on this, the characters were decent, aswas the backrounds, it could be fixed up such as the "looping" with a stop-action code, and probably some subtitles for more quality to the animation overall it was a decent flash.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble, This flash needs a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash. so stop by the forums on here newgrounds, and do a sreach for "flash help" or "STOP-ACTION-CODE" and your terms should bring you to the actual stop action code or other help that will help you in stoping the loop.
Good animation with some funny humor and good characters but could use some fixing up though.
Bad lip sync
The lip syncing was comparible to old Japanese films. The lip shapes were pretty good, just not on time. It definetley could use some background music. The story was kinda slow at times too. But other than that I liked the graphics and story.
The was okay
Animation and plot are good. But the sound is really terrible. First there is no sound at all. And when there is sound, it is not clear enough spoken for a non-native speaker to understand most of it. Additionally most of the voices are not properly synchronized with the moves of the lips.
With imporved sound it would be a really good one.
Not bad not bad,
But U need to increase ur framerate a little, cuz it looked all laggy and stuff. Also puting down some chill music to get the whole "sitting in coach watching tv" feeling would have been cool.
And the sound didnt synch up for me.
Love the lip movement man but trie increase the fps a little and a streaming sound for the synch. And if u get any problems trie to put 1 layer full with background music on 0 dbs ( basicly u cant hear it ) to make all the other sounds and silences synch with the movie
In fact not too bad.
All in all it ain't too bad. The faces are nice and surroundings too.
What I didn't like was, that the voices were to low.
Maybe some new microphone or try to wokr on the reccordings a bit.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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