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Jun 20, 2006 | 2:48 AM EDT

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Author Comments

**PLEASE READ**
this is meant to be a short, don't complain about how short it is please! thanks.

peanutbutterlock

Reviews


pyromania1pyromania1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i love randomness

that was random and i loved it!


peanutbutterclawk responds:

cool


FrenzyFrenzy

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not Bad

+COMMENTS+:

The graphics and style were pretty good in this movie. The sound quality was pretty good, too. Also, it was very funny.

+IMPROVING+:

Well, I know you said don't complain about this in your authour's comments, but it was too short! That's really hte only problem... and maybe make it have more of a plot.

2/5


peanutbutterclawk responds:

alrightay!


LirikLirik

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Overall - 5/10

+++Graphics+++ Score: 3
Thats the main thing u should work on. The animation was allright, but u shall add more background and draw characters better.

+++Style, Interactivity+++ Score: 3 each
Lock legion... it will be cooler if u make not sticks, not clocks/glocks/locks, not sprites but a movie u draw urself.

+++Sounds+++ Score: 4 (but it deserves 2)
Well, you had sounds and thats something, but u used Speakonia or some program like that. Next time use real voices (i used speakonia in one of my movie and it got low score) but i gave ur movie 4 for sound cause its lock legion (so u better dont make locks anymore).

+++Violence+++ Score: 2
Well, the violence was when the guy flied in space, but i gave it 2, violence is not big, so the main score will be more if violence is 2 but not 8 (exept if it has a good humor)

+++Humor+++ Score: 7

What can i say? Overall - 5/10! Nice but u have to work on it.


peanutbutterclawk responds:

thanks for the criticism, but I'll be a lock for a while, It really helps you with flash.


Don-BrickDon-Brick

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Lawl

''**PLEASE READ**
this is meant to be a short, don't complain about how short it is please! thanks.

peanutbutterlock''

I quote you!


peanutbutterclawk responds:

:)


WeakSausClockWeakSausClock

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Meh

It wasn't bad, the flash was fine, I just didn't get much from it is all. Sometimes I don't, but good work on your end.

it is win


peanutbutterclawk responds:

thank joo.