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Any feedback at all would be great. this is a class project and I had to do a "fairy tale". Well I made up my own ... it doesn't make a whole lot of sense, but what fairy tale does?
Newgrounds is like the Apollo theater .... so so rough, you know yer getting the good review.
So... Much... Potential...
It's funny, I had no idea what to expect -- the music starts, and the credits roll, and I'm thinking "what, it took two of them to pick out the music?" -- and then the singing starts and I realize it's original music -- fantastic!!
And then I realize I can't hear a damn word you're singing. Well, okay, about every third word.
Looks great, SOUNDS great, it's got a SCENE MENU (hence the 7 in interactivity) -- maybe the animation could use a little more work (it's opretty simple stuff, mostly)...but you need to either mix the sound better or stop mumbling.
Good job, though! Please please please try to do something about the sound... or give us a subtitle option!
there is a second version with subtitles already loaded up.
i protected it and it showed me the flash protection movie xD
Your drawing is great... but thats IT Your music isnt clear enough, I couldnt make out what the lyrics where and it was just boring
it was great make more i like to see what happen next :)
I thought it was good
I liked this flash a lot, the song was a little hard to understand, i had to watch it a couple of times to understand some of the words...but other than that great flash!
thanx, I am addding subtitles to the next version so hopefully that will help out ... I'm not what you would call a ....singer.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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