alas, though Ive spent months preparing to make the animation this short trailer version was disappointingly rushed... I had to get it done for my college assessments, so 2 days of constant work later and here you go.... I hope you all think its alright ^_^
I've deliberately tried to make this extra rbdom to avoid it being "just another trailer".... oh well, enough of my sorry excuses, enjoy!
oh, and if you want to see where Im going with this, or dont believe me when I say Ibve been doing prep for ages, then check out the storyboards in my deviant art gllery http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34932465/
whoa
This is a very creepy looking flash movie. The voice acting and background music was very nice. Went well the drawings and animation. Very nice frame by frame animating. That was cool how the guy with the gun got jumped at the end like that. I really wish to see what else happens. very nice stuff.
thanks ^_^
not bad
its pretty kool tho its really short
yes, this was intended solely as a teaser trailer as time restraints kinda stopped me ompiin the full piece... this wouldfd amount to about 7% of the full concept, so naturaly theres little area for plot.... glad you enjoyed it though ^_^
well...
well let me start off by saying you have done an excellent job on the backgrounds, they are really nicely textured, and the colour scheme of them fits together really well... your style is quite... unique, i like the messyness of it, well to a point at least, but the flow of the animation didnt seem very interesting, but i guess if you were pressed for time, i guess that is why. the sound, well it sounds like you've got a £3 mic and are in a barn of some kind... the ambient noises, well they were just sort of out of place, unless the noises were suggesting the movement of the mechs flying around... well the "look what he did to the pug" bit made me laugh, but overall the story was quite lacking... who? what? where? how?, just seemed far too slapped together and if this is for a project, they'll probably mark against you for that, the "story" didnt seem very structured and therefore takes interest away from it...
oh and also add a proloader, ppl on dial-up will hate you otherwise :P
MW
some nice criticism there... you're not far wrong about my recording setup though :P
the college can kiss my ass though... threy can take this as is or whatever.... I dont have time to remake it in time for monday, lol.... but thanks for the feedback ^_^
Work on the sound before you actually release this
Please.
of corse I will! as I explained (kinda) in the authors comments, this was, regrettably, rushed for a deadline, as such all the sound effects where made in my bedroom on my crappy microphone using less than perfect sound editing software, the final version should feature far clearer sound... and less random droning too!
.......................sure.......................
it was ok....it was pretty lame and kinda unhearable...ahhh....wat the hell....id watch it again but i like odd pointless stuff...lol
meh, I wasnt expecting any great results from this submission, but I'm still a flas h n00b with bugger-all time on my hands so d rubbish equipmenrt... so this was probably all I was capable of in the context.... thanks for watching!