A Hobbit, a wizard and 12 dwarves enter to a ...
Pretty good, add more sprites and effects for Gandalf, and make some more for other chapters and book reports.
Author Comments
Hey, I made this book preview for one of my book reports at school. It turned out pretty good so I figured I'd post it on NG to see wat u guys think, did my flash skills improve? Please view and post some useful feedback, thanks!
(( Nice idea ))
~~REVIEW~~
You did something good here first off the idea was great dont see this all the time, some animations could be improved but for the mostpart it was entertaining and i liked it, nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation and effects would be nice.
~~OVERALL~~
A neat idea for a flash.
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wow
Never knew Gandalf could fly...
el sucko de-grande
this sucked..first of all.they are trolls not sneering dogs.. and instead of having them in you should add the pert where bilbo and the dwarfes are captured by the orcs of the misty mountains and their wargs. that is a wery interesting place in the book
...Gandalf can fly?
It was funny. But in a bad way, sorry. I couldn't keep a straight face whenever there was a scene with a flat Gandalf hovering horizontally.
Plus, you didn't need to show the goblins being turned to stone, kind of unnecessary.
Nice try though.