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No explanation required, very short though. Just new techniques I tried out.
All constructive criticism accepted please.
Constructive Critiscism, here we come!
I like the whole video thing with a cartoon on top, I always think that's fun. But you didn't a) give the viewwers any reading time on your text, b) didn't make the music loud enough to head, c) didn't lip-synch very well although my computer is kind of slow, that could have just been me, and d) your characters are very static. Make the more interesting by making them move, like sighing or blinking or even just a simple hand movement/gesture when they are talking. Something.
Do it again and I'll watch it again.
alright, well I have to give you kudos for actually giving constructive criticism, unlike others, so ill try to improve.
what was that?! not even worthy of our time!
It's strange how you're a level.2 with no flash, and no experience, and you obviously don't know how to write reviews, and telling me it wasn't worthy of your time. And I said "constructive criticism" if you know what that means. Ill write YOU a review. Go learn flash, newgrounds, and vocabulary, and THEN review me.
I liked the graphical style, but nothing ever happened. I think you could use the same style in a future movie successfully, though.
Thanks for the tip! (not sarcasm)
wtf were you thinking when you sent this in
Wow. I said constructive criticism (if you know what that means). Your a level.1 with no flash, and you don't know how to write reviews. Go learn, and then message me noob.
so bad man
ok first of all when the words came on the screen, they weren't on long enough to read. i personally think it wasnt good enough to submit on NG. you know how some random things are funny? this was so randow it wasnt funny. i apoligize if any of this sounds mean, it is mean to be constructive. i found it odd how your characters had pot bellies. i dont see how you could build the story from here. but it is an intresting looking (man, woman, both, whatever).
I'll fix the titles, and I dont plan to build from here, that was a test that I thought would be enjoyable to watch.
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