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I tried to added a lot more animation this time. Special thanx to Newgrounds the fans, cause I do it for you guys and great voice acting by Lucien Dodge and Laura Post
Could be better
Voice acting was good, animation was awsome in some parts but not so good in others, and I think the music could have been stopped better than just cutting out half way. The fight scene was pretty cool except it had a very Dragon Ball feel to it (maybe thats just me) I liked the close quarters combat much better than the energy blasts.
Over all, some things could stand to be improved but I'm screaming for more.
not to good, but keep improving
at first i thought i would give this 8 of 10, then i saw the rest of it.... 6 of ten!
beacuse the graphics were good, but not that good, and sure you used subtiles at the start, but you stoped after the fight, and its hard to hear what they say, and about that hole, he walks right forward and HE DOESNT DETECT IT, HES A VAMPIRE FOR GODS SAKE, and then she walks after him AND FALLS DOWN TO, DONT YOU THINK SHE WOULD SEE IF HE SUDDENLY FELL DOWN A HOLE!!! and the story, well, there was barely any story in it, and in the fight, doesnt you think they was bleeding a little to much, no cutmarks or anything, it just streamed out blood, vampires arent even supposed to contain very much blood, i mean, they have to drink blood to survive, and that means they lose blood with time, cause have you ever seen a vampire puke out the blood he drank for a while ago to get room enought to drink more, give it some story, lyrics, s little more logic and make the blood stop streaming out like that and this will get one of my favorit videos. (youre still very good, i dont even know how to animate a stickfight, but i just want you to improve stuff)
hey its me again!
i love it the voices were perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=3 he's even better than before!!!!!!!!!!!T_T there has to be a fan club for this*sigh*
i agree with evilgoku14. if you need more voice actors i be one.
dude make the next one i gave u a ten because 1 it was longer 2 your picutres are way better now 3 u made then actually talk that was the awsome part 4 this time u made it funny!
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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