Score: 6
"not to good, but keep improving"
date: May 9, 2008
at first i thought i would give this 8 of 10, then i saw the rest of it.... 6 of ten!
beacuse the graphics were good, but not that good, and sure you used subtiles at the start, but you stoped after the fight, and its hard to hear what they say, and about that hole, he walks right forward and HE DOESNT DETECT IT, HES A VAMPIRE FOR GODS SAKE, and then she walks after him AND FALLS DOWN TO, DONT YOU THINK SHE WOULD SEE IF HE SUDDENLY FELL DOWN A HOLE!!! and the story, well, there was barely any story in it, and in the fight, doesnt you think they was bleeding a little to much, no cutmarks or anything, it just streamed out blood, vampires arent even supposed to contain very much blood, i mean, they have to drink blood to survive, and that means they lose blood with time, cause have you ever seen a vampire puke out the blood he drank for a while ago to get room enought to drink more, give it some story, lyrics, s little more logic and make the blood stop streaming out like that and this will get one of my favorit videos. (youre still very good, i dont even know how to animate a stickfight, but i just want you to improve stuff)