This is good... for a first flash.

If you try harder on the next one you might go far.

I have to agree with Darkman

I wish people would spend more time on such things as creating a good storyline. Make it interesting. If you just have a bunch random images and sounds,as most on here are...you will keep no ones imagination. I am by no means an artist,but while goofing around with moviemaking,have made better stuff than a lot of crap thats on here,by far more talented people than myself. A lot of you guys have the talent,now,have the patience and make a masterpiece like Xombie,Minusha,Brackenwood,and some of the other great vids on here. Thanks for listening.

Could this be anymore gay, really?...

I know this is your first entry, but like I've said a million times by now... For the love of God people... try taking more time with these before submitting!! And if this is the best you have to offer (Although some people with no taste might like this bunk!), then maybe you should reconsider spending your free time doing other things! Anything!! Anything but this!! I know that's harsh, but DAMN!! I mean for Pete's sake... try looking at the archive on Newgrounds, and you'll see that some of the earliest submissions, were in my opinion, some of the best to date!! Which is sad really... because even though I may not be the authority on Flash, or the fact that I've never submitted myself... I still believe enough in myself to think I have decent taste!! But the worst part is, I'll bet the Flash making programs have gotten better over the years... which tells me the youth have not!! Instead of dropping "X", and jerking it... why not sit down and practice your future!! I mean after all... you youth have the advantage to someone like me!! Your growing up with better technology!! When I was young (A LONG TIME AGO), game controllers consisted of a joystick and a button!! Now there are like 100 on a controller, with a lot more complex things to remember!! So there's no excuse... "Pride comes before an ass kicking" Proverbs DarkMan2003 v.01abc

rain rain go away

what i meant by that is for your flash to go away

Good!

You are pretty good at flash. Practise drawing and make more frames to walkin. Add some sounds and make cool effects. This would be cool. The music didn't fit to this..