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oh snap this is old. mmm i *think* i made this in 2004..it was around then, and i just stumbled upon it while going through files. Its pretty bad, ive never been especially good at flash
well, you got the review no one reads. so il splain it to yu lucy. grachips suck. stlye is bad. sound is slow and if you meant it still badd. violins, evey1 getz a 5. interactivity samus. humor, i thought i saw this as a blooper for that airline that when bank-rupture. was it delta, or ... ya, u know what i mean. HINT* ya means yes in German.
yea thanks for that awesome review man...i knew EXACTLY what you were trying to say
You did a really nice job with this frame by frame
Very very original idea, and I liked how the overall mood of the piece blended in with the music. The frame by frame was very good, and your stick figure had alot of character despite of... Well, being a stick figure. You did a nice job with the theme of the animation, and the frame by frame was good. I could see that you spent some time on it, and I hope that you get to do alot more, especially if your quality improves. Who knows, you might hit Daily Feature or Weekly some day if you get better!
My only critiques is... Just color it, or make a little bit more detailed backrounds, or make the story a bit longer with a bit more depth of the character really attempting to fly. Also if you would have made the wings a bit better drawn when he flew away he was standing, usually you just float. So try to bring more life into the stick figure by giving it human characteristics. Otherwise I like the fact that everything else is muted but the music. Great job!
Am I the only one who truely understands this?
It is obviouslty a film about a depressed Stickfigures desperation for some hot seagull poo-tang, all while Jazzercising.
hahaha Jackie...youre a silly bitch
This could've been much better if not for the stick figures. Still, the animation was pretty smooth and the simplicity lent it a sense of style. The music was also an excellent choice; it fit the mood of the flash but does not overpower it. Nice.
This was a very good flash despite its graphic.The Music went really well with the flash. Good Job.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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