This deserves a higher score.
It was a little sloppy in some parts, mostly camera work, but also your hand was visible a few times, which is really bad, but I am willing to overlook that because the animation was good, and it had an interesting style. I have to admit it didn't make sense, but I still thought it was pretty good. Just work on keeping your hand(s) out of the shot (It wasn't a lot, and it was very minor, but it is still a problem), maybe improve the video quality, and I'm sure your next video will have a higher score. You've got talent.