Translation found in the full author commentary!
This short film braches off my first, which I would be thrilled if you would watch! I think I've improved on my second film, and any thoughts about that would be appriciated! Thanks so much for watching.
Translation:
Love.
Ah, springtime. Is it not?
<<Some flowers, ma'am?>>
O, my lord.
<<Ah choo!>> (Lol.)
(Ice cream shop.)
(Tunnel of love.)
<<The cinema, my dear?>>
<<No.>>
<<No!? Why not!?>>
<<Because, I don't like the cinema.>>
So...
He walks alone.
But...
"It is better to have loved and lost..."
"Than to have lived without a cinema!"
<<Yes!>>
Another uniqe hit
I beleive ou have started your own little series now. I enjoy them myself. Keep on working on those flash skills and eventually your style will become big. Simple yet fun! You could use this charcther in many diffrent type of flash films. Keep up the work and I expect to see more!
Another Awsome movie
another great movie... i really like the simplicity of you animation style. on this movie, if you ever revise it, i think in the subtitles you should have english and then on the actual animation have the french as like speech bubbles because it is really hard to watch the animation and flip back and forth from the animation to the authors comments...that is the only complaint i have about this submission...not only do you have good animation skills your style is very very distinct and appealing... keep up your awsome work
Superdork4_24
Thanks a lot for the ideas. I did seriously consider having the characters speak in speech bubbles, but I was worried that what little detail the animation had would be lost when 1/2 the screen was speech bubbles. My initial thought was that you would read first, then watch, or watch first and read, but you do bring up a fantastic point. I'll deffinately take it into consideration on my next film... I think I'm ready to retire the marshmallow for the summer. :) Be sure to check back, and thanks a bunch!
Please, mate, correct your french
I could guess you used bablefish or somthing to write that up. A few sentence are ... not well written in french. If you would like some correction, mail me. Otherwise, good flash :) Nice joke.
Considering there are only a couple of sentences total, if I even got one wrong I'd have a bad average. But yeah. Thanks, "mate."
Hehe...
I dont know, why, but I had to laugh all the film, since I saw this little guy walking. :-)
Lol. HIs stride is my shame...
Sweet... like a FOX
Very cute, I liked the style and the accordian music. Very good.
Thanks for your review. :)