i liked it
for a schiool project... and your first time....this is a great flash. only thing i didnt like was when the couch was transformed the shape tween made it look realy weird, but besides that it was good
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This is something I made for school and I thought that I should submit it to see what you guys think about it. If I get good reveiws I will put more that I wanted to put on the movie that I didn't have time for to do for school.
Ringwraith1 responds:
The idea of the shape tween was that it was supposed to look wierd, like it was being transformed, but I agree, it could have looked better, but I was pressed for time. I'm glad you liked it.
...PRETTY GOOD FOR A FIRST TIME...
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Well, I like the Speakonia voice at the end! (I was thinking about Speakonia voices, and then it came up!). Also, I guess the subtitles were pretty good, too, and were right on cue with the speaking. This flash was kind of funny, too.
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Well, I guess the graphics could have been better (and maybe the style, too, I guess...) Also, maybe it could have been longer (that's not a huge complaint, though)...
2/5
Ringwraith1 responds:
thanks alot, it would have been longer if i had more time, and alot better quality.
Hmph,pretty good for a first one.
Not bad. you did a good job for your first time, but i think that you should work on your graphics and try to put mor effort, the reason why i say this is because everybody in the front looks like a human figure but then in the background there is a stick man. If you have a scanner maybe try drawing some of your characters and then scaning them. If you dont thats fine, you will get better with
experience. =) Good job though, keep trying hard.
Ringwraith1 responds:
like i said, im not really new to flash, just that this is the only one that i have put effort into and that i only had just over a week to complete it.
Good for ur first try
I think your a good young artest My advice for u is paritce using all of the metreal inculding graphics and voice over is really imprortet
Over all it was good for ur first time keep working on it and make sure its funny as hell
Ringwraith1 responds:
thanks, it would have been alot better but it was a school project and i only had just over a week to do it.
really good alex is just starting out in flash
good direction nice idea well executed
Ringwraith1 responds:
actually i didnt just start, this is just the only one i have actually put some effort into.