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This is our first movie. It took us a week to do. We hope you like it!
Please Review. If it's slow, please lower the quality.
I hope this is a traler for an upcoming produchen becus this loocks swet i hoop to see more from this consept
Ofcourse it is. I've started on episode 1. I'll make it better than the trailer. thanks for the 10!
i liked it could use sound effects but i liked it
i liked it could use sound effects but i liked it. it had good grafix and the music was good exept for it cut off near the end. that is all i have to say.good job.
the sound cutting off is a glitch. In flash, when you test movie, its fine, as soon as we published it, it was fine, as soon as it got submitted, something went wrong.
Agreed with 65th angel
The graphics actually weren't bad. They did their job. But I feel like just a little more effort into detail would have gone a long way. The grass was plain green, the sea was blue, the flags were pure red with maybe a gradient. Basically it needs more visual interest in most of the shots.
Some sort of story or background plot wouldn't hurt either. The sound got points off because it ended a few seconds too soon.
Good job! I love this kind of stuff. :D
Cheers. It was our first try. We'll do better next time.
the music fitted well
the graphics need 2 be some better...the soldiers were nice and that skull effect was good but the elves faces need improvements and the background was cheap
-make everything some faster cause it was a bit slow
-boring?? yes it was a bit boring make a fight in it...its not way that hard to do and can amuse the public
i would give a 5 to some1 who has done some more movies but since this is your first(newgrounds submited) flash i give it a 6
more effort in the graphics and fights will make this flash a lot better and may interest people
hope this review was useful
Thank you for the tips. There used to be more models, but this computer is unfortunately a bit slow, it couldn't handle more than a few animated movie clips per frame.
Next time, I'll be hoping to have more people and better graphics.
I second that
You use fast cuts, close-ups and rythmic cutting like a pro. Maybe you do need more graphical polish, but there´s lots of potential!
IMO, you should now devote most of your energy to get a good story going, then get some decent voice acting together (REALLY important!), and maybe just a little more fluid animations. Never mind about the style or the details, I think it´s the right mix of ingredients that makes a good movie!
Thanks very much, i'll take that into account.
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