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Soft and Crunchy a Wonderful Funny band That I Am Trying To Help Surface. Hope You Like The Movie I Didn't Work To Hard On The Art But It Is Still Just So Damn Funny. Enjoy.
0 for the graphics- they didn't work
4 for the style- (I support creativity)About your creativity(that of the band) I advise searching a diffrent ways of uttering it or in searching lessons on improving your singingskills to actually, well....SINGING skills> Don't start on me calling this rap, it misses everything from beat to energy, and even the rhytme is off.
4 for the sound- and that is for the way you actually made it sound of a quite good quality, that is; understandable, for rating music: see above.
0 Violence, Interactivity and Humor: - this isn't even funny anymore, maybe if you speed it up a little, work a bit on your timing and see if you can actually produce a voice that is not likely to pitch in every energetic beat you try to squeeze out, and it would be nice if you would every now and then. Maybe it would even then be a little more amusing to listen at than it is now.
-Overall: I suppose you need a lot of practice, but I don't think you will ever be able to really make it to anything if you keep on "singing' like this. Also the text doesn't contain anything not explained from the same context a thousand times already. Being creative with words can actually promote your talent into something attracting to people. I don't know what you were trying to attract but it certainly must be smashed and flushed down the drain because you are creating a monster. Anyway, I wish you guys all the luck you need(non-sarcastisly of course) Because I really like people chasing their dreams and trying to express themselves. It is too bad you only seem to express the words used so many times before, in stead of your own voice of freedom. Although, I suppose your still young and too rebellious to even listen to any advice given.
Practice, and consider any advice blowing by
grabbing on to chances that first seem unlikely to succeed sometimes can be better than holding on too much to ground not suitable to harvest anything from.
Fawn Mew-sama (fantasy and sf-writer)
the play button didnt work that i want to see that i like when flash make fun of emos
well the grfx are cool only one problem ure flash button does not work!!!!
uh yeah, the play button dont werk? sorry but i haf 2 giv this a poor rating.
Call in the Corinor! this ones dead!
its emo, thought I would see emo kids getting shot in the face or something that is really cool...like emo kids gettin shot in the Face! But instead I get a lame white rapper who cant rap, trying to justify emo in a way that just makes him seem even more delusional that what he already is. I wish parents would take a more active role in thier kids lives, like....shootin stupid emo kids in the face!
Trust me life aint that hard, get the f*** over it!
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A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
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