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May 26, 2006 | 11:27 PM EDT

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=This was made for my Animation class, and is my first finished 'real' flash. Please don't blam it=
A man goes to make a deal with a shadowy figure, but eventually takes matters into his own hands..

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luftwaffe1luftwaffe1

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

shitty

it started off okay, but then it just got stupid. you really seemed like u just faded off and sunbconsiously started mimicing Madness with the whole thing. imitation is the best form of flattery, but why did you not stick to the simple story that you had going that was at least decent?



AranaxAranax

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good

Its pretty good, but the graphics sucked.


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TheBeagleTheBeagle

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Alright

Original and action-packed. I like how you made the dealer completely black. Nice style there.

However the graphics sucked. Work on that. You have lots of potential.

6/10

Keep them coming.


Nerd-101 responds:

I can draw good with pen and paper. I'll probably just trace my storyboard and animate in Flash next time (if i can be bothered.) Thnx for constructive criticism


KrayZeKewlKrayZeKewl

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not too shabby...

Considering it's your first attempt, it was good. I'm sure that you know your graphics aren't the best, but the use of focus and an attempt for 3d was decent. Although it didn't have a unique, nor interesting plot, I can tell you put alot of work into this.



punkrockgamer7punkrockgamer7

Rated 3 / 5 stars

well...

it was alright but it didnt make much sense


Nerd-101 responds:

With the exception of the breifcase beating people up, it made perfect sense...i think..